Navarone, Navarone's Ghost, Anubis:
Your writing is sloppy, riddled with errors, and provides little of interest even when one ignores its technical blemishes.
I have valuable advice for you:
The next time you post anywhere other than Whimsy, provide enough details to show that you've already investigated the topic you are talking about.
The investigation could be an experiment that you have conducted, or that you have seen someone else conducted, or even something that you read in a
book or journal or on a reputable website.
Whatever you post about, you should make a respectable effort to spell words correctly and in their entirety, and to use such perfect punctuation and
grammar that no 7th grade teacher of English would hesitate to give you an "A."
If you don't post about a technical subject, and don't post in Whimsy, then your prose should be rich and beautiful in addition to technically
flawless. If Vladimir Nabokov's ghost isn't green with envy, you have failed.
I hate cluttering up perfectly good threads with this sort of off-topic discussion, so let me be extra-clear:
If you are incapable of following the above advice, kindly go home and eat bleach and die. |